Galaxy

Galaxy

A Poem by Alicia™
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The brilliantly bright stars shine in the night...

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The brilliantly bright stars shine in the night,
In the galaxy where there are too many planets and stars to count;
Too many for a person to count in their lifetime.

© 2011 Alicia™


Author's Note

Alicia™
Written for a competition… The theme "galaxy" came from http://oneword.com and I was supposed to write a poem in 60 seconds.

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For a 60 second poem, that was enchanting. A simple three verses was really all this poem needed to portray the magnificence of space. Well done, thanks for sharing.
Koodoos

Posted 7 Years Ago


Brilliantly written in just a minute... I wish my brain could think that fast! lol
But this was well thought and written... great job :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I often think of this and wonder myself if A THOUGHT CAN BE LARGER THAN A UNIVERSE?

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is really good. I love it's short simplicity. It's very refreshing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pretty good for 60 seconds! I like the last line! Good write! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and smart!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliance in 60 seconds. I'm quite impressed that this could come in 60 seconds, it's really quite beautiful and thoughtful as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For 60 seconds this is amazing! I prefer reading shorter poems as opposed to longer ones because I think you can get the point across easier.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very simplily put but very powerful

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet and wonderful, very well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 3, 2011
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Tags: galaxy, contest, stars, planets

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