Golden Heart

Golden Heart

A Poem by Beautiful Mistake
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Who you really are is in your heart and mind not on your face

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I may be a poor man but I'm rich inside
You may be able to buy a ticket to see the world from the skies
For if you see the world through my eyes
I have seen the dark in the light
Walked through fire while feeling the wind
I see the brightest diamonds in the thickest ash
True beauty is hidden in the world waiting to be found
Love of life is free without trying to buy a key to what they are blind to
For the greatest prize is the golden heart
And the love that's inside not boastful pride
You may be rich but I'm richer inside

© 2016 Beautiful Mistake


Author's Note

Beautiful Mistake
Stay golden

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Great piece here. Love the truth this poem speaks and the way you say "I" and "you" as if speaking directly to the people in which you are comparing yourself to. I feel this poem can help people reflect on their morals and character a bit. My favorite lines were "For the greatest prize is a golden heart
And the love that's inside not boastful pride."
I feel those lines got the idea of the whole poem across in the best and most direct way.

Thank you for the wonderfully thought provoking poetry, keep it up!
SeemsPoetic





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Beautiful Mistake

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Thank you for your feedback. I wanted to word it so that anyone who reads it would be reading it. Fr.. read more



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Great piece here. Love the truth this poem speaks and the way you say "I" and "you" as if speaking directly to the people in which you are comparing yourself to. I feel this poem can help people reflect on their morals and character a bit. My favorite lines were "For the greatest prize is a golden heart
And the love that's inside not boastful pride."
I feel those lines got the idea of the whole poem across in the best and most direct way.

Thank you for the wonderfully thought provoking poetry, keep it up!
SeemsPoetic





Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Beautiful Mistake

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your feedback. I wanted to word it so that anyone who reads it would be reading it. Fr.. read more

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Added on November 28, 2016
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