Silent Ocean

The first poem I ever wrote

Drowning in my sadness

Sinking deeper than the sea

Just like everyone I ask

Why me right as I hit

The bottom with hope in

Sight I silently pray that I

Might find the truth and find

A new world where I can be

Happy but as many have said

before it's only a dream and

Nothing more I see that now

As I drown quietly on the sandy

Ocean floor 

Author's Note

Sometimes silence hurts more than words

Reviews

[St. Fugaz]

that is so good that is amazing for a first poem

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes I agree.. Silence speaks volumes...happiness may seem like a dream, but it isn't.. Its just about the right time that it will come.. Nicely expressed emotions...

[B]

I have rather believed silence to be peace
but i can see your take on silence

interesting piece

[Beautiful Mistake]

Most people do so I wanted to show the other side of silence. The part where it hurts more than words, where you're all alone wondering and sulking in silence

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

I've felt this way before. Wishing happiness was real, but instead it is just a dream.