Lower Than Low

Lower Than Low

A Poem by Jayden Hawke
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Another one about the people that put you down

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You try to put me down
You drag me below the surface
Into the deepest layers of the Earth
But I am not suffocating, nor am I burning
I am standing up
And rising up against your downward gravitational pull
You are lower than low

© 2010 Jayden Hawke


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Great job! i love it! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow. thats deep Jayden. its so.... intense, man. i luv it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Jayden Hawke
Jayden Hawke

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