Not Okay

You ask if I'm okay

You ask if i'm alright

But the truth is

I've been crying

All day and all night

 

So tell me all your secrets

I won't blow them all away

Like you did to me

Telling me its for the better

Telling me it's all okay

 

Can't trust your better judgement

They both suck like s**t

Give me another shot

Another drink

Another hit

 

Can't take your constitutions

I'm always in a rut

Just give me the same bloody knife

Give me a gun

And i'll cut

 

Can't tell me what to do

Can't tell me what to say

Can't get this love

Can't get that girl

Without having to pay

Reviews

[WriterMe]

Very emotional. I think it would make great lyrics to a song =]

[Dante Harper]

Wow. There is alot of pain there. I had to read it a few times to make sure I caught every meaning behind it.

[We are young.]

This was amazing, I like the rhyme, and the meaning to it. Yo painted a vivid pictre

[KatieDaray]

I lovethis poem!

[Fanciful Goddess]

Great!! I like it alot!