Fall Apart

Fall Apart

A Poem by The Silver Chord

No one knows, no one follows, wrapped up in a torrent of vodka and Red Bull.
Listening to the songs for the deaf, tripping out on a caffeine attack from hell.
Possibly a sequential turn of events passing through every pore and every God given stem cell and ligament known to man (and a few only known to monkeys.) Feeling like a millionaire of radio influenced drum beats, synths, and adrenaline pumping enthusiasm. Common dread of losing a fight with myself, the devil, and a praying mantis named Geoff, of crashing down into a stronghold of cadavers in drag-queen attire and whatnot. Damaged massacre mistaken for a gun show of foul play, probably just a fluke or passing trend. Ten thousand days of negative energy passing through the eye of an infantile mindset.  Negotiation is null, cries in vain, massive attack of panic and desperation. Obsessive devotion to a cause without a motive, painstaking realization that we were wrong. Do we elect the dead or do we just live on with a desire to live free under a thumb of tyranny ?
Hell hath reigned, or does it just appear that way?
Puppeteer of snowy mandolin players, screaming down the express lane, hoping to land in the comfort a person of female persuasion.
Schizophrenic passages of dribble and ink blots, torn into a pile of monochrome confetti.
 Necromantic anomaly of the unjust, property to a life with no future.
...........................................
............ Buzz buzz.
      F**k.
Time to get up.

© 2011 The Silver Chord


Author's Note

The Silver Chord
I fixed some of the punctuation that i missed. Also added in a little bit seeing as the previous draft seemed a bit lacking.

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that red bull will do it every time.... if it don't kill ya....

"Ten thousand days of negative energy passing through the eye of an infantile mindset."
very neo-zen.....

the only way to end a dream is to wake up... sometimes an alarm clock just doesn't do the trick.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ha ha, nice! I enjoyed this read. Great write! =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


for someone who looks like they're fifteen years old there is more antagony that would crush you ifyou tried getting into a nightclub, especially in NY. They just love to send wondering writers back out there on the streets knowing exactly who is also just kicking it around one in the morning. I think that was a long title instead of a free write, I say this in the most branded way, If I was you I wouldn't be in California right now, so that's waht I wanted to say.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Many a night I have been rendered D.I.D. by the content of Red Bull and Vodka. While contemplating the reality of “no future,” I drowned my sorrows within the piss and vinegar of the younger yonder days. I really enjoyed this read!
One must wonder if the tyranny of hell, is man-made devotion.

Great Write May Man!
RLG,
Tommy

I found this awesome piece via the referral of Emily Burns in forum of the Referral Group…


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hell, yeah!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that red bull will do it every time.... if it don't kill ya....

"Ten thousand days of negative energy passing through the eye of an infantile mindset."
very neo-zen.....

the only way to end a dream is to wake up... sometimes an alarm clock just doesn't do the trick.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

eventually, after several days of reading random writings in this site-web, I find another poem to add yo my favourite list. _Puppeteer of snowy mandolin players, screaming down the express lane, hoping to land in the comfort a person of female persuasion._ .. WOW !! this was Genius!
Despondency and horror are spoken through such vivid and artistic expressions. the end's hilarious.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ENJOYABLE!! I loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HAHA! Brillaint!
"Common dread of losing a fight with myself, the devil, and a praying mantis named Geoff, of crashing down into a stronghold of cadavers in drag-queen attire and whatnot."
my favorite part.

Great nightmare feel...horror with a sense of humor is a beautiful thing. Well done!
Cheers!

R.G.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unique style.. I like it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Silver Chord, and I too like to party. Generally I'd like to say that I think way too much. All I ever seem to be doing is thinking, pondering, musing over some random thought or idea. .. more..

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