Dip

Dip

A Poem by Silver
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A monologue, of someone realizing the truth of the world, and taking it negatively. But, instead of feeling depressed, you should/can take the truth in stride to make life better.

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How is the question.
How did this come to be?
How did my life make this turn?
How do people not notice?!
But, of course,
There are always answers.
My life took a dip,
As do all things,
When you realize
How horrible things are.
It's truth.
And you can't fight it.
Life. Sucks.
That's how it came to be.
One simple, little thought,
Had changed me.
It's not a happy one either.
Depressing,
Miserable,
Painful,
Sad, to say the least.
That's how my life turned.
One simple little emotion
Had really messed with me.
But, by human nature,
I hide.
I show my good side.
I can't show how
My life has changed me.
I can't express how
A thought has hurt me.
I can't expose my true self
To anybody, but me.
This is how nobody sees.
A simple human reflex
Has really tortured me.
God.
My life really took a dip.

© 2017 Silver


Author's Note

Silver
Have fun with the truth of life

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I connect with this so much, as I'm sure many do. It's like you learn one thing or experience one feeling and everything changes. The world around you is never the same and your views change. My life has taken many dips, guess it's a part of growing up? Meh. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


That's really good! I really liked it. The truth, well, we have to face it someday. And you told that truth in it perfectly! Just amazing!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on July 2, 2017
Last Updated on July 2, 2017
Tags: Questions, depression, thoughts, answers, apathy

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Silver
Silver

Tacoma, WA



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I like to make people feel things, which is why I write slightly(or more than) depressing things. But if I leave the reader with emotions, and thoughts they didn't have before, my goal is complete. more..

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