Limerick

Just a fun collection of word play. Just an exercise to keep the mid sharp.

Much too written words,
To fill two written verse

Too hidden behind
As nothing you'll find
Except the rhythm within words.

Sitting between two curves
Mirrors collided universe

In the reflections hide
A whole world to find
Hidden insight, inside
inspections

Eyes distorted perceptions 
Forming newly scribed dimensions

finding yourself in your head
And forgot where they went 

In plane site it does hide!
(Waiting)
to appear and surprise!

Psychosomatic Inception

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. I love it.

[Simbles]

You guys are the best x) keep that positive energy flowing. Love it. Cheers all of Yas

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading

[Simbles]

Appreciate it muchly :)

[mou]

Indeed a poem to keep the readers on their toes. Sometimes the circumstances and our unconscious heart give a birth to this 'Eyes distorted perceptions'. I love your style of playing with words!
- mou

[Simbles]

Thank you !! :)))

Would you shed your opinion?

Original
Too written words,
To fill two written verse

Too hidden behind
As nothing you'll find
Except the rhythm within words.

Sitting between two curves
Mirrors collided universe

In the reflections hide
A whole world to find
Hidden inside the Minds inspections

Eyes distorted perceptions 
Forming newly scribed dimensions

When you find yourself in your head
And you have forgotten
where they went 

Hiding in plane site
Waiting to apear and surprise

Psychosomatic inception

[mou]

My 'eyes distorted perceptions' (earlier) did not score above my heart's whisper (then and now) :) The misunderstood words, incomplete journey, and everlasting memories make us realize that these order or structure of words are for those who was never ready enough to sit with a honest, vulnerable self. Probably, that's why a newborn child is welcomed to see the new world first through his/ her mother where he or she is understood without the utterance of single word. I love your multidimensional writing style where every reader will find his own story.
- mou