B...b...

Flippant attempt to write on the demise of my old relationship

I always f**k it up like this,
There's no torture devise in existence to rival your kiss' memory
Good luck, good bye, I don't love you, good bye
It's sad we weren't ready to share truth together

This morning things don't feel too bad
The world is burning, I'm glad it's burning, but it doesn't seem like my fault
So you bear no hate,
You're happy now,
Well that's good


I'm not going to get over this one,
Pain became excruciating,
I desired utterly not to be,
Everyone abandoned, everyone,
But no one's ever been kind,
That's not something you can recover from

Good bye, my love,
Thank you for our hearts flamed into light and burnt up to the Fire as one, and sang away all darkness,
For an instant

Reviews

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

"Good bye, my love,
Thank you for our hearts flamed into light and burnt up to the
Fire as one, and sang away all darkness.
For an instant "
your amazing. The anger and pain you shaped into your poem... Great write :)

[shywriter]

sad.. and angry but very good

[creativequill]

this was good, full of raw emotion, you can feel the heartbreak and anger, good write!