Time Moves On

Today's Poem

Time Moves On

Time moves on, and what has changed?
Some things, for sure, have rearranged
But you will find within this land
That very slowly things are planned

And sometimes plans are never seen
Despite a dream, however keen
The chances that we see may pass
To be cut down, much like the grass

Then don't be slow to show you care
The world is neither cruel nor fair
It's up to us by how we live
Make time to share and time to give

Tomorrow brings another thought
More precious than the things we bought
So much has passed, so much has gone
Then tread with care as time moves on

(c) Simon J. Halliday 2014
http://www.mysteriousbooks.co.uk

Reviews

[Nathan]

Sounds great. I love reading such kinda stuffs having rhymes. Mostly, the writers write or use some tough lang. writing stuffs which's, of course, good but what I think is simple lang. can easily get understand by many bunches of people then no matter whether their tongue lang. is Eng. or not .. I like the simple words you used and really enjoyed reading this beautiful rhyming poem. I'll look forward to read some more stuffs of yours.

[magenta24uk]

What a lovely piece. It makes me feel sad but elated. I am not even sure why but it has a voice and a great heart beat. So much has gone - so true and yet so much has come anew. Excellent writing. :)

[Simon J Halliday]

Thank you for the kind comments :)