Numb

An air of hollowness, emptyness feeling so numb

My heart beats fast
Numb
The sound of a pin drop illuminates this space.
It's narrow ahead, no souls around but you
Listen to the sweet betrayal of ones mind.
Knocking, chanting battering ones subconscious.
The hearts blue frozen to the core desperately holding onto every breath.

My body longing a gentle touch, bleeding out the pain echos my decapitated heart.

Hollow eyes, caged broken yearning to free this burning disgrace.

Author's Note

Please I'm no good at Grammer or spelling, not written for a few year go easy on me or not!

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This is a very visceral piece of writing as well as emotive. One can feel the angst of each sentence and internalize it to memories they may have had that brought them closer to their despair. Good job Simba and thanks for sharing your work.