Again and Again

Again and Again

A Poem by SimplyOlivia

Waiting alone.

Again and again.

Sitting quietly.

Waiting in the dark.

Waiting alone.

Again and again.

A silver light darts.

Across fleshy skin.

Blood flows down.

Down from the wrist.

And onto the floor.

The blade falls to the floor.

Plink. Plink.

Blood drops slower now.

Drop.

Drop.

Drop.

Again and again.

Drop.

After.

Drop.

Again.

 And Again.

© 2010 SimplyOlivia


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Wow, very creative write, i read after a noon time, i saw this title "AGAIN AND AGAIN" i thought what's it now, and as i did start reading this shorty poem, i felt much good because again you've done an awesome job by making this piece. Love, dove, pain, hurt in heart, real things and so on i saw here in this write. Very good job this time but it's a heartfelt as well as a painful write you made, hope it didn't happen to you in real what you've dropped here in this piece. This's really a teary write and i felt this piece from heart. Great job once again as usual.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice! I love how it forms a rose in the end! Ever read books by Ellen Hopkins? She does the same sort of thing in her books.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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SimplyOlivia
SimplyOlivia

Chattanooga, TN



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Sometimes, people say to describe yourself in one word. My word is interesting. I am like a diamond, multi-faceted but still see-through but beautiful to look at and desired, not to mention expensive... more..

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