Silently Waiting

Blood drips faster.

Drip. Drip. Drip.

Still waiting.

Constantly waiting.

Silently waiting now.

Blood flowing slower now.

Still dripping on the floor.

Drip. Drop. Drip. Drop.

Still silently waiting.

Waiting.

The blade flashes again.

Flesh crawls open.

More blood flows fast.

Drip. Drip. Drip. Drip.

Thinking.

Waiting.

Waiting silently.

The blood finally slows.

It eventually stops.

Sitting Silently.

Silently Sobbing.

The blade flashes.

Again and Again.

The blade drops.

Plink. Plink.

On the floor.

Pressure is applied.

To the cuts from the blade.

Stopping the flow.

The flow stops completely.

Forever.

He dies.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

An Emotional and a real write, this write's damn kool and it mostly apply's on those who're in love and when they get some hurt from someone anyhow or they lost their love ... or anything happens with them in a way they cou;dn't able to get their true love then this write becomes true... and it eventually happens in reality too. The world's filled with crime indeed and this write made me freak and i made some views of this write in my mind by your words. A deep write you written. I can feel that pain of the situation... Keep writing, filled with emotions, tears and pain but love as well. After one day everyone'll get the end and blood would stop flowing through our veins ... then we'll be free from worse things what we did and what we do all the time. Nice heartfelt a splendid write you made. I liked this write. Keep writing.1

[Brittany]

Creepy. Chilling.