The Forbidden Journey

 

 

My love, you must leave me now for sickness has alas taken your final breath

But I will not let you go in silence, nor alone 

Instead, I will walk beside you within your shadow

For we will always face our journeys together as one

I must also leave my life behind me now

 As I shall never abandoned you

You have become a part of my soul

 Without you I can no longer breathe

I can not bear to never awaken again to your smile, your warmth, your touch

We shall now lie together beneath the shaded trees 

And where we once shared our love

We will now share in death

So let the wind blow and the leaves blanket us in their beauty

Your shoulder now my pillow

Your lips rest softly upon my head

And whom ever shall stumble upon us

Will know that our lives have never really ended

But have onlyt merely just begun

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

God Janice how sweet..as i known you to be..what depth of emotions you write
this was so sweet..so fresh..i was taken wholly by your words..how tender..it shows
what a nice soul behind it..
My love, you must leave me now for sickness has alas taken your final breath..
But I will not let you go in silence, nor alone
Instead, I will walk beside you within your shadow
For we will always face our journeys together as one
You have become a part of my soul
Without you I can no longer breathe
I can not bear to never awaken again to your smile, your warmth, your touch
Will know that our lives have really never ended
But have merely just begun..true love could prove that and much more ..how i enjoyed this write
i read it so many times..so dear to me are those lovely words ..
lovely sweet work..words like gold

[Kelley]

Kind of Gothic but lovely to the fences
that block out the rain......smiles
I just love reading you Janice
This could be taken many ways,
but I think the best way is just to
take it at face value and remember to
never let go.

Kelley

[Butterflymom]

Romantic, intense, beautifully written, and soulful! This was very well done...AWESOME job on this piece.