The Coke Junkie

"Please Explain" contest entry..picture #4

 

 

 

I'm known as the Coke junkie who sits inside a shopping cart

I draw huge crowds inside Walmart

 

People act like I'm such a commodity

Yes, believe it or not, some even make fun of me

 

Geeze, I'm just a girl who likes to hang around

And drink up all the Coke in town

Because I love to feel the sting as it goes down

 

But me I could care less what they all say

Because I'm heading back to the big "W" again today

 

I hear the Coke truck just came and restocked the shelves

I think I'll drink it all, all by myself

 

So the next time you go shopping and there's no more Coke to be found

You'll now why....Yes indeed, the "Coke Junkie" came round!

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sseoni]

What a cute poem! I really liked it! It was very well written, and funny, too! I loved that the word 'coke' was written in red. Great rhyme scheme and everything! Wonderful poem! :D

[Clarisse Nanoit]

HA! so cute. =) You kept with the pattern of no color but red, which makes it very pleasing to the eyes. Nice, friend. Very nice. Thanks again for entering the contest! Tell your friends. ;)
KH