Drama

Darkness all around,

whispers in the room,

yelling harsh words,

others crying,

for the words,

untrue.

 

People laughing,

others standing around confused,

while one is on the spot light,

wishing,

hoping,

that one person,

just one,

would speak up and help her.

 

But the help never comes,

and the words get worse,

like every move she makes,

is a mistake from hell,

if only that one person could've spoke up,

the things she did would've never been done,

but now there is just another lost life,

because nobody seemed to care.

Reviews

[TLK]

I like the secluded, isolated feeling engendered for the person in the spot light. The shadowy nature of her antagonists is very suitable.

However. I don't really feel empathy. I think more is needed to get inside the head of the persecuted female: at the moment there is a lot of behaviour, but not much thinking.