Jesus you are magnificent

Jesus you are magnificent

A Poem by Dancing Butterfly

it a poem about how beautiful Jesus is


Jesus you are magnificent, you are abundant.

I fall on my knees crying out to you, in this trial of affliction and torment!

Life has vanished from these bones.

No longer can I stand.

Laying here in a desolate dessert, whilst thorns from cactus, pearce my delicate porciline flesh bleeding.

Crying for hours, these soft cheek are blistered and raw.

 The serpant is devouring this mortal body, being draged into utter darkness.

Am I trapped? Death has no excape,

please do not let me languish, for my troubles are great, more than be taken at one time.

In a distance someone swooped me up into soft wings.

I felt peace in the midst of my storm as He had healed this painful agony.

He Took me into a secret place, and softly whispered in mine ear and said; My bride, I can feel your pain in side my own body, my compassion is to great for ye my beloved therefore

I can not bear to let ye suffer any longer.

I shall deliver ye from this torment.

My beloved for ye I was crusified.

© 2010 Dancing Butterfly

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Beautiful Sissy I love it i am so Happy you Joined me on here

Posted 12 Years Ago

This was beautiful!!! The ending was so full of hope. Starting with, "He Took me into a secret place,"

This was awesome! We need more God-inspired writers like you!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Dancing Butterfly
Dancing Butterfly

elmira, NY

I like music taking piano lessions vocal lessions. music composition. song writing. music theory. I like riding horses I like cats I like classical music more..