To be in your shoes

To be in your shoes

A Poem by Kunda
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What's your shoe size??

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First thing i'd do,
if I were put in your shoes,
is tie those laces,
which are pretty loose,
dusting them clean,
is what i'd do thereafter,
cause I wouldn't want people,
to fault me with laughter.
Walk, and walk good,
is third and no less,
so as to leave a print,
that haters can't mess.
The next thing i'd do,
i'll leave it to you,
cause after all,
this, and this is your shoe.

© 2015 Kunda


Author's Note

Kunda
Does this strike you as comedy? I was experiment a style of expression..let me know.
And what's your shoe size?? :)

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hahahah, comedy or no comedy, you did good on this one. it looks like the poem is deeper than it looks, don't know if it was intentional, or i am a de-constructivist. walking in another person's shoes, sounds like trying to be them. but the way it ends shows that you cant be the other person. I can see an issue of identity and torelance

Posted 4 Years Ago


Kunda

4 Years Ago

Thanks. The line of thought initially was that: in as much as one would want to help/advise another .. read more

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Kunda
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Lusaka, Zambia



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