It's my life

It's about loving life just the way it is.There are good days. Although they don't last as long as you want them to, but they have this tendency to come back.So, live today and hope for tomorrow.(nice lines, eh?)

 

It's my life...

Sometimes, it's out of control

It's my life...

Sometimes, it obeys my soul

It's my life...

Filled with mysteries yet to scrap

It's my life...

Sometimes, it's totally crap

It's my life...

Sometimes, full of light

It's my life...

Where everyday I fight

It's my life...

Sometimes, it's sad

It's my life...

Now looking ahead

It's my life...

Just the way it is

Everyday's not 'MY' day

But still, I dare to live

 

Reviews

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Good write! It's objective and honest. "Sometimes, it obeys my soul" - bittersweet beautiful. I like the optomistic ending too.

[Nely Amorim]

excellent ending and surprising : Filled with mysteries yet to scrap,It's my life...Sometimes, it's totally crap I like the honesty of this poem.. i think your a fighter... do you know that you are? I hope so..hugs... excellent work Mel

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I love the ending!!!! Great write... It's so true how life is... we have our good days and our bad days... We have days we love life and days we wish we were dead... It's full of good thoughts and things... It has a great flow to it and was an easy read... Great job!

[Natasha Ashway]

'Everyday's not 'MY' day. But still, I dare to live.'
Couldn't have ended more appropriately.
Nice thoughts.