No nothing but still something

No nothing but still something

A Poem by Enigma
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It just spilled out of my mind. It talks about contentment, I guess.

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No riches

Nor a king's throne

All I need is

A Home Sweet Home

 

No wardrobes

Filled with pretty gowns

Just something good

I can wear to towns

 

No walls full of

Expensive tapestry

Just a small window

From where I can see

 

No wide roads

Or carriages

Just a bunch of trees

And few patridges

 

No maids or servents

Nor any driver

Just a musician

Or maybe a piper

 

No prince to

Fly me away from this land

But, yes, I'll be needing

One true friend...

© 2011 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
IS contentment reflected in the content of the poem??

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Absolutely! That's actually what I was thinking the entire time reading it. I really love the view you express in this piece, how life can be so much more simple than we all choose to make it. I love how the author is simply content with fulfilling her duties as a human being and finding in it what simple joys she can. It reminds me of the song Simple Joys of Maidenhood from Camelot!

No maids or servents

Nor any driver

Just a musician

Or maybe a piper

This is my favorite stanza. I love the word choice. The imagery in the entire piece is beautiful, it takes me back to times of kings and queens, very beautiful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Well, this seems to me likes it's one of those poems where you just want to be happy I couldn't care less about having anything super special, I liked it

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You seem very content to me, but one thing I can't figure out ... Do you mean to say that you are looking for a good friend or that you already treasure good friendship?

Posted 16 Years Ago


cool. this poems great! i like it. i'm too tired to elaborate in fine detail lol. but i'll try and come back at somepoint and explain why i like it :D well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Contentment is beautifully reflected in it .... a calmness flows out of it ...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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