Just can't break away

Ohk...you'll have to guess this one

Yeah! It's me

Don't you recognise me?

Oh! So these wounds are now my disguise

Do they seem strange to you?

But why?

YOU GAVE THEM TO ME!!

 

Oh! You don't understand

Why will you?

You never admit that even you can be wrong sometimes

That even you are not perfect

You will never admit

But I'm not perfect

Not even close to it

So WHY ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME ONE??

 

Damn you!

Curse you!

Guess what?

I really do HATE you!

Not because you hurt me

I'm used to that

But because you broke my trust

And thanks to you

I'll never trust anyone again

This world is filled with people

Who're sweet as honey on the outside

And sick as slime on the inside

I didn't knew your kind

But I do now...

 

And I'm ready and willing to let go of you

Or rather let go of my pain

And try live a new and better life

 

But alas! It's just too good to come true

Coz' I know I can never break away from my own blood...

Author's Note

I'm not gonna say to whom I've dedicated this poem to. But I think, you must have guesses it.And if your guess IS correct, you won't like my idea.But can't hide the truth for long, can I???
Apart from that, the poem sounds good to me...

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

If one can't break away from one's own blood there are not so many choices who it can be!

Yes you are right - apart from that the poem sounds definitely good to me too :) even very good.
You are very talented, really!
I like the way you write and express feelings and emotions. Unique in some way and that's special.
Wonderful job again! Thumb up!

[Pinky]

Its an awesome rantish poem! good job!