Ode to romance

Its' actually an romantic ode. I'm bad at titles.... T_T

Anytime, anywhere, anyplace

You jump into my head

Everyone can see it on my face

 

I don't know if it's good or bad

But it's definitely sweet

The sweetest feeling I've ever had

 

It like ice cold heat

I shiver under the Sun

Whenever we tend to meet

 

I don't know if you're the one

You do seem to fit

I wish, a bit closer, you'd come

 

Don't worry! I won't hit

I'll simply hug you

Or even kiss you, a bit

 

But it's too good to come true

So let me wait for the right time

Till I know what I am to tell you...

Author's Note

My second ode!! Needn't widen your eyes, dear friend. I've turned really romantic tonight.... ^_^
Hope you enjoyed that.... :)

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

holy crap this was awesome.
holy crap i FREAKIN LOVED IT.
holy crap this is exactly how i feel! :O
Wonderful poem. This is going on my "#1 most favorite" list... that there's only one of! W00t!
Wonderful job, my friend. Keep writing. :)
"I don't know if you're the one

You do seem to fit

I wish, a bit closer, you'd come"
I FREAKIN LOVE YOUR POEM!!! :D