Because...

Romantic lyrical write.

Blinded..
To every sight but my dreams
Confided...
In no one but me
Knew that...
This is a never ending chain
Felt that...
I'd never feel like this again

Because its you.
And because its me.
When I held you hand
And you kissed me.
Because its love
Not a lie.
For each other.
You and I.

Mushy...
Is what I feel all the time
Blushy...
Coz' I know you're mine
Smiling...
As I remember you,dear
Hoping...
If only you were here

Because its you.
And because its me.
When I held you hand
And you kissed me.
Because its love
Not a lie.
For each other.
You and I.

Author's Note

I think it has a certain rhythm to it. What do you guys think? Oh. And I think its a very childish, but cute write. :)

Reviews

[kurrupted]

to be candid this piece is WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW! and indeed its a great lyrics...believe me if i say it will make dido, beyonce, kelly price....say "Hmmmm!". the flow is great and the theme exceptional...will very well make a great song.
"childish???? are you kidding me...well einstien said "any great idea (work-emphasis mine) which at first doesn't seem stupid and ridiculous doesn't have a future"...and this piece just made pass that point.
will you mind if i add the rap verse to it??? lol! it iwll be like that laid back, mellow groove kind of flow, you know that mario winans/puffy i dont wanna know kind of flow
double thumbs up girl.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of love. I like the gentle flow and the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Vin]

I really liked this :)
My favourite part was:
"Mushy...
Is what I feel all the time
Blushy...
Coz' I know you're mine
Smiling...
As I remember you,dear
Hoping...
If only you were here"
Really sweet and romantic.
Great write here, as for being childish? Not so much, in my opinion :)

-Beth

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautiful love poem. I really enjoyed this read. Sorry it took me so long to read it. Only thing, "Because it you" i think you mean 'because ITS you'. :)