Hated Love

" Trapped, stuck with someone you hate.

 You're forced to love a loathed enemy.

No escape, unable to leave, Looking at them makes you sick inside.

It's a love you never wanted, it's one you're forced to live with while hatred burns inside"

Reviews

[smilempsn]

Shot but deep and meaningful write.. :)

[BubblingMe]

Okay this was really good, dark and beautiful

[Dreamer]

I appreciate it!!

[David]

I can relate to this it reminds me of my brother, great job kido

[Dreamer]

Thank you, Ryan! I appreciate it.

[David]

you're very welcome lol

[Dreamer]

...................... (:

[Coyote Poetry]

No waste of words in the amazing poetry. I like the direct and honest words in the poem. It is a bad place to be when hate and love can be spoken in the same sentence. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dreamer]

Thank you for the review and you're welcome!

[Patrick O'Neil]

Wow, no one should have to live like that and no matter how hard you try to convince yourself that there is love. its really only fear and hatred.

[Dreamer]

I couldn't agree with you more, thank you for your comments.

[Heather]

this is great a suggestion for the title (although its kinda long you can ignore me if you want!) "my friends are close but you my enemy are bursting my bubble" you could add so move on the end or anything im sorry for being terrible :D

[Dreamer]

thanks for the suggestion and taking the time to read my poem.

[Heather]

no problem, my pleasure, you're welcome!! :)

[Dreamer]

I encourage you to read my other poems if you find the time!

[Heather]

I definately will when I have a spare min! ! :)

[OTownPete]

Here's a suggestion for the title "The Back Door Beckons". Anyone who stays in such a relation must somehow enjoy the pain. Your friend in words, Pete

[Dreamer]

Well, I can see where you might get that conclusion but it being a real case scenario that's not the actual conclusion. 'They' don't enjoy the pain but they cant escape it no matter how much they want to.
Thank you for the suggestion and sharing your thoughts (:

[beautiful dreamer]

different structure. it makes it kind of hard to see your scheme, but we're all entitled to our own unique ways! i love the message though. i'm horrible at title's myself so i cant help you out there. great piece dreamer!

[Dreamer]

Thanks, I appreciate it.

[beautiful dreamer]

you're vvery welcome!

[Cupofwords]

Oh! I got it. The perfect title! "ONE NIGHT WITH CONSTIPATION." LOL ...stuck...no escape...can't leave...burns inside...perfect!
Just kidding. This was a good hate poem. Keep writing.

[Dreamer]

lmao. Thanks I appreciate you reading it (: