The Come Down

The Come Down

A Poem by Skitsy
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A profoundly deep poem.

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Seemingly tragic is the soul and mind of the human. Right and wrong is more similar than it is different; feelings implode and erode; creations are born to die. The whole of the world, the sky and everything around us created from a fallen star, what is there to live for but what we make of the matter that we are?

© 2013 Skitsy


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Skitsy
Written in a dark time of my life when I was using certain substances.

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Dark with an optimistic touch at the end. I love how you put so much meaning in a short piece easy to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


But still has a powerful pull to it. A deep meaning and images that stay with you. Great stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i feel that it conflicted a little bit, but very pround and philosophical, nice work

Posted 10 Years Ago


This piece is 3 in 1....
Short... Dark and Deep...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hmmm, interesting. It doesn't exactly look like a poem but it had the feel of a poem to it. Great writing, it made me think.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes darkness; but I can see powerful shards of light reaching into the darkness and seeking you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 24, 2013
Last Updated on August 24, 2013
Tags: poem, philosophy, profound, life, mind, deep, artistic, scientific, poetry, depression

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Skitsy
Skitsy

United Kingdom



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