Seduced I fold the Known

 

Seduced I Fold the Known
Showering the Bleeding Moments
To allow the Soul to Dance
Delighted
Devoured
carefully Caressed
to Uphold the Unfolding Unknown

To Notice a Moment of such a Wonder
Sometimes passed in Silence
Ghost-like bodies melting into skin;
Footprints evident to Existence
Shadow-filled heartbeats pounding Times into Lifetimes
For a split Forever Shared

Dreamlike;
Worlds weaved into a star-like Parlor
Breathing Heaven Empty of Angels
Licking Words upon peeling skin
Voice the Resonance of Sound
[moans and sounding breaths]
unto the dripping Void

Unfolding;
between Being Alive and Living

To Fold the Known
and Reach further still

Limitless

 

~ Skye ~

Reviews

[Elvina CZq]

The words you use are so simple with vast meanings, making them hard to catch. It is like being asked a simple question but having hard time answering it. In a way, your words played in a movement that give imaginary images to my mind and it is breathtaking, definitely passionate.

[Dani California]

Another incredible piece.
I love how your writing challenges
my mind.

"Dreamlike;
Worlds weaved into a star-like Parlor
Breathing Heaven Empty of Angels
Licking Words upon peeling skin
Voice the Resonance of Sound
[moans and sounding breaths]
unto the dripping Void

Unfolding;
between Being Alive and Living.."


To merely exist is not the same as to live...

The depth and spiritual nature of your
writing is what truly has my attention,
though your style and talent are also
endearing. The word selection is outstanding,
and the flow is great. The content... well,
it's deeply understood within my own interpretation
and definitely pondered by this reader.

Wonderful work! Indeed...

[✒☁Chau Mad..]

good poem, I like how the words are being put together :)

[C.J.]

nice poem floating off into the void good line.