First Breath of the Sun

First Breath of the Sun

A Poem by Skye Céibhfhionn

Watching walls vaporize into nano drops,
finding new forms;
shading pictures
that color the edges of an expanding Mind.

I find Life to give support in the Breathing
as if the Morning Breeze is only for me.
I look through the catalog of Lives Passed,
and find You missing in my current one.

The Soulful Cores communicate in Distance

It's such a craving to think You up
and lure You out
from the myriad of Resurrections.
As if steps cannot be taken,
for you have one of my feet.

I shiver through Memories of watching the world Wake Up,
and Reach out,
taking the first Breath from the Sun..

For Us

~ Skye ~

© 2021 Skye Céibhfhionn


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Breathtaking, your work has a way of clearing the mind. i love the way the sentence create a scupture of thought, this is masterful and contemplaive with a sweeping flow. the ending leaves a stunning image to behold in beautiful, grasping from an enlightened poet.

I find Life to give support in the Breathing
as if the Morning Breeze is only for me.
I look through the catalog of Lives Passed,
and find You missing in my current one.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like very much!! Love your style of writing, your use of image is how it should be done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Skye Céibhfhionn

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Perfect. That's all i can say. Truly perfect.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Breathtaking, your work has a way of clearing the mind. i love the way the sentence create a scupture of thought, this is masterful and contemplaive with a sweeping flow. the ending leaves a stunning image to behold in beautiful, grasping from an enlightened poet.

I find Life to give support in the Breathing
as if the Morning Breeze is only for me.
I look through the catalog of Lives Passed,
and find You missing in my current one.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Skye Céibhfhionn
Skye Céibhfhionn

Sweden



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