Is that all you think about

This is all I hear when ya open yo’ mouths

 

“Damn girl I like them hips, them thighs, that chest and that a*s is just far from fine”

“Boy please is that all you think about night and day”

“Can you ever say damn I like your eyes those cheeks and your hair is so fine”

‘Cause those are the first words that come out of yo’ mouths.

And when you text me “Hey sexy” just makes me wanna scream.

Just say hey and stop hitting on me.

 

“Hey boy what you looking at ‘cause my eyes are on my face and is no were near below my neck”

 

Author's Note

So my friend and i were working on this during drama class and well never finished it. It needs some editing and it's messing a couple things so if you can help chime in. :D

Reviews

[Persona]

Oddly enough, it's interesting. Different from other writing you do, which is good. My issue is that it sounds a little stereotyped. Maybe the next bit you do could have a new spin - such as an ugly girl that wants to be appreciated for something other than her kindness, or a nice guy that's good looking but insecure for being a little dim. Othewise, nice

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you and thanks for the suggestions

[Ahmad Cox]

Unfortunately I know guys like this. I enjoyed this one

[Sunny Skye]

Yep unfurtunately. Thank you for reading.

[James William Dyer]

"...those cheeks.." lol, just teasin'. Urban-style, and remember, men are not all one-dimensional, as the poem portrays them. That might shut some readers out, might stereotype them so to speak.