Moment

Hey just stay a while

I’m only here for a second

I will be leaving in a couple minutes

Just tell me what you are thinking.

 

I’ve seen you around

And I’ve spotted you starring

Just tell me how you feel

Or would you like my digits

 

Last month you were here

You came to talk to me

But you got scared

You said your friend like me

You said he was shy

But as I look back…

There was no one there

So who is this friend?

Is it you?

 

You must tell me soon

Because you only have twelve seconds to go.

 

Author's Note

Tick-tock Enjoy

Reviews

[Persona]

Aw this reflects such adorable young love. I instantly like the boy in this - there's nothing cuter than a shy boy awkwardly trying to admit his feelings! I'd like to know in the poem where you were going or where this happened - I'm imagining such a sweet scene! Is this to do with your real life?

[Sunny Skye]

Yes this did happened to me and it was actually during school. He is a really good looking guy and well he is shy :P Thank you for reading i hope that answered your questions. :D

[Persona]

Absolutely.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Because you only have twelve seconds to go."
I like the ending. Funny how time can make seconds seem important. I like the desire and the use of time to make your point. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you for reading & reviewing.

[Ahmad Cox]

I really enjoyed this one as well

[Sunny Skye]

I'm glad you did. Thank you

[Steven Cash]

Ahaaaa nice.

[Sunny Skye]

Glad you liked it. Thank you