Don't pretend

Don’t Pretend

 

You’re so funny

You’re so smart

Is just so poor

That everything is a lie

 

You’re the coolest but you’re the worst

I don’t like you so don’t come around

Stop acting

Stop pretending

I don’t like hearts that are black

Pretending to be good

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

Separation is far best when something is revealed about a person. They don't change. Maybe some day but they won't for anyone because they don't see it as you do. Good, nice and short, poem

[Coyote Poetry]

When you know the truth. A bad person won't change. Best to get separation. I like the directness of the words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[i-love-you-boo♥]

its pretty good it is missing a little of something but its good keep sharing

[freelancejouster]

the third line makes no sense.

the poem feels like it's missing something. context, connecting words, i don't know. something.

[jennifer little]

nice poem loved reading it great job keep it up

[Laureeann]

This is so good. It's so straight forward and refreshing.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like your writing. It's simple and to the point.

[Linear]

Gosh i'm so sorry did'nt mean to pretend and break your heart, now i'm sorry we are so far apart.

good poetry

[Marie Harrison]

I don't either. Very effective and moving poem.

[Caitlynxoxo]

Stop acting
Stop pretending
I don’t like hearts that are black
Pretending to be good"

Very moving lines to end and equally moving poem! Fantastic job, thanks for sharing!! oh, and neat picture by the way :)

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo