Incense

Incense

A Poem by Skylah Ginette

Swirling smoke

Inside a sunbeam.

Eddies of air

Settle, then shift,

A slow sway.

Twirling, curling,

Bending, now backwards,

Dancing to the rhythm

Of breath.

© 2015 Skylah Ginette


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Very good use of description. Make the movement of the smoke come alive to the reader. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Skylah Ginette

5 Years Ago

thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is awesome. Really cool imagery. Very nice.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Skylah Ginette

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Soft and soothing is how this reads to me today. Such a sweet and hypnotic fragrance floats from your words Skylah.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Skylah Ginette

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on December 7, 2015
Last Updated on December 7, 2015
Tags: incense, moment, smoke, sunbeam, air

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Skylah Ginette
Skylah Ginette

BC, Canada



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I grew up in the mountains of British Columbia. A lot of my inspiration is based in love, nature, societal issues, as well as my own emotional hurdles dealing with sexual abuse. more..

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