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You....

You took away everything that was precious to me. My friends have turned against me. My loved ones turn their backs on me. And I am left to drown in my own tears. And you just sit back and watch. With a smile on your face. All I can do now is try to hold onto what I have left. Now there seems only one way to escape...

Death...

Through death I can be free of you. I can finally be in peace. But I know I will never be happy. I will always be alone. With no one to love. All because of what? A stupid little fight?I cannot do anything because I have nothing left. So now I just watch as you rip me apart bit by bit. And you will not stop until I am nothing but a ghost of my former self

Author's Note

Okay well I recieved a negative comment on one of my posts. So please NO RUDE COMMENTS!!! KEEP IT TO YOURSELF!!!! IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY STUFF THEN LEAVE ME ALONE!!! AND FUCK OFF!!! I JUST WANT TO WRITE FOR FUN!!! I'M NOT J.K ROWLINGS!!! I'M NOT PERFECT!!! SO GIVE ME A BRAKE!!!

Reviews

[M.Babu]

Hi. There's so much raw emotion in this poem that it does what many of your critics cannot...be real.
I believe in constructive criticism but rude pigheadedness is vile. Ignore them and follow your heart's desire. Works for me. keep writing, this poem proves your critics wrong sincerely.