Ranting

Ranting

A Poem by Dr.Who.LOVER
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Just wanted to get my feelings on paper

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Doors slamming, swears being thrown, tears falling. That’s all that fills my home. No words filled with love and comfort only with words filled with hatred. It’s as if they’re putting the rope in my hand, waiting for me to step of the ledge of the chair as my body wriggles in the air. Snap goes my neck. But does she scream as she finds my lifeless body dangling? No she only throws her head back and laughs. I know I’m going to hell, I have condemned myself to a life of agony but I only smirk. It’s just like they say

Out of the frying pan…

Into the fire.

© 2011 Dr.Who.LOVER


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Dr.Who.LOVER
I know it's disturbing

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I definitely know where you're coming from, and I can't say it's going to get any better anytime soon. Killing yourself though is not the answer. I promise. All it gets you if you fail is 6 mental hospitals and a broken family. And really, if you succeed, you'll be brought into the next life with the same exact problems. So try to keep your head up, okay? Message me if you want someone to talk to, dear :]

Posted 12 Years Ago


:'( ik what you mean here since we discusted it many times before. I'll repeat what i told you before, don't listen to what anyone says, your amazing and if you die my heart will die with you. You need to live!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I adore this.
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Like, a lot.
There's so much anger and emotion. I LOVE IT. ♥

Posted 12 Years Ago


Last line is great....

Posted 12 Years Ago


DONT KILL YOUR SELF OR EVEN TALK ABOUT IT PLEASE!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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