Phew

"10 words"

exhale.

letting go

is not a sprint

but

a 

marathon

Reviews

[Tom McRoberts]

This is wonderful. I admire you skill at delivering meaning through form and structure as well as (if not more than) in the word choice. I really get the sense that this poem is an exhale along a long run, great stuff. Keep it up!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh i like this---it's easy to let go in spurts...but to totally allow others in, to allow life in...that takes great legs.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx jacob.....I need to get over my spurts.....any advice? :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

can't really give any because i am a "spurts" person also---
:))))

[fattycbreezy52]

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!
is it actually you running with full speed and trying to reach a destination?;);D

[SleeplessVolcano]

Not running to, running from....:).......I am not fit enough to feature in such a pic.....maybe next year.....:P

[fattycbreezy52]

Haha....You are an honest mortal on this earth.
Wow next year?I hope I survive ;D

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it is .. every moment a deep cleansing breath :) nice! short and precise .. with depth .. a great cup of tea for me
E.