Next to the river

My thoughts flowed down the restless stream

bouncing over rocks and dreams

the waterfall they did not fear

wanting gravity to pull them near

At once they felt the weight of life

it lifted when the depth was felt

at peace they flowed, at rest at last

hoisting joy upon life's mast

Reviews

[Nisreen]

So beautiful and tranquil !!!!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks...:). I will send you the picture of the river where I wrote this.....:)

[Nisreen]

please do ....................

[R J Askew]

A short surge of strong emotion in spate here. Danger looms but the outcome is positive. Lean writing.