Lost heart

I found your heart floating downstream

in the cold mountain pool south of the cabin

when I tried to grab it,

it swam upstream, like salmon

and I realized, I'd better let it be - 

it seemed so free

surrounded by luscious green

and never-ending indigo blue skies

so when you feel a sudden surge

of life, or love, which you cannot explain - 

that is your heart, emanating the beat of your soul

while it swims butterfly

as it watches life spawn

in the cold mountain stream

where you dropped it

once upon a clumsy hike. 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

"once upon a clumsy hike."
indeed! especially enjoy that closing sir!
E.

[Healing Star]

oooooo this imagery, with the coldness and the turning away. sometimes it's just not the right synchronicity in time, and since we are running through cycles maybe it will be right next time.
I liked this very much, beautiful

[Ange Faith]

Delightful in a way and sad at the same time. I like this