Naked words

Your naked words

undressed my thoughts

all I had left

was memories

of you

flirting

with me

under the

cherry blossom tree.

Reviews

[B]

Words bare
Bring about this flirt within
Love those short pieces

[Elyralune]

I feel like this would flow better in present tense: undress - have- are; change those three and it seems smoother. I mean, keep it the way you want, obviously, stay true to your heart. I'm only offering advice on rhythm and such. Great words, honestly, it makes me think maybe that's the only memory left because its the most innocent.

[Weeping willow]

Such beauty lies within these words as images of love so carefree whispers it's fun;-] Truly lovely.

[Lechusa]

Straight to the point! Love it, your symbolism is on point.