On the wings of a breeze

Is there space for me?

That beautiful spot next to you

Flickers like a flame in the wind

 

Could this moment be?
We’ll sway in the colorful breeze

Eloping into fields of flowers

 

Can you smell the air?

Come pollinate my words

With your willing flutters

 

I have heard your call

And I will arrive soon

North northwest

Of tomorrow’s stubborn hearts.

Reviews

[B]

I can't love anything more than butterflies
How stunning is this piece .... sparking this idea of beauty and being in the company of all that is so

[Elyralune]

"come pollinate my words / with your willing flutters"

I love the language, the use of vocabulary, and the easy flow reading it. And it's a colorful breeze, not just a regular warm breeze... Great use of analogies in here.

[SleeplessVolcano]

thank you very much.....I'm stuck in a desert, so the absence of natural beauty, ironically, is stirring some creativity...:)