Broken bricks, unspoken roads ~ Senryu

Unraveling threads -
Naked souls, battered and worn,
One-size-fits-all pain.

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Good solid and constructively penned senryu - I read this over a few times to let it soak in ... very enlightening!

[Ken Simm.]

So sad, stark and really beautiful.
As I've said before with others. Form to me is not as important as what it says to me and this does.