Limerick of love

Lights, camera, action

you've become my secret distraction

When I hear your voice

I have no other choice

than to give my eyes fresh traction.

Lights, camera, action

you are my simple fraction

Equally I divide,

when you're by my side - 

It's time to cease our inaction.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is something so playfully beautiful about the way your poetry flows, into the sweet joys of loving. I can sense the lightness of these moments, making you float in just the music of a voice.

[sette]

interesting read i have enjoyed it

[SleeplessVolcano]

thank you very much....I tried to give a more serious spin on the traditional "silly" limerick...:)

[sette]

and it really worked