Sunken love ~ Experimental

The anchor did not save me

It dragged me down below

Too deep this now is

To catch my breath

This is it

Good bye

love.

Author's Note

I'm not aware that this poetic form exist yet, so I'm not sure what to call it :) I started with 7 syllables, and moved down to end with one.
Let me know what you think!

Image = Sinking Heart, by Mary Kinzelberg

Reviews

[Mrudula Rani]

Your format resembles Nonet, which has 9 lines and starts with 9 syllables. Now you have invented a format you should give it name and get patent pending.