Foolish

A person foolishly in love with another.

Life never had sweet happy endings

They was bittersweet such as your poisonous lips

Whenever we kissed it soothes, calms my nerves.

A drug to never be played with; you leave me high craving your love

Your touch is an everlasting sin�"leaving me with temptation to let you in

Was I foolish to run back to you or am I right to never be your fool again?

When there’s no other place to run to, I find you here at a stand still.

My heart beats heavily for you ever since we separated

These tears cried out in the utmost sorrow as you left

Your absence had left me in a mess, the blow plummeted me into fragments of my old self coming anew

These pieces was razor sharp and cracked to the sensitive touch

It did take awhile to fix them together and start brand new

But all I see now is you

They call me foolish for believing in you but who else shall I go to?

Everyone have someone they desire and mine happen to be you

I wanted to love you again for better or worse no matter what anyone says

Gossip is rather toxic; anyone can be burned when it splashed their way

Don’t leave me behind

The memories of us is resurfacing in my eyes again

The innocent joys, our gracious laughs and the comfort your hand relieved the pain in mine own

Would you destroy all we had together?

I could not stay away… not at all

I was never one to leave this alone

I have to see you for one last time

Catch me before I fall

I am foolish for you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Silver_Anime]

this poem is amazing. i really loved the beginning as much as i loved the end, and i can really feel the love in this poem.
its very good ^_^ keep it up!

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a good poem because I believe every line, you wrote it because you fell this way and wanted to talk about it.I really like the last couplet, you have talent and I look forward to reading more.

[Angelic Surrender]

I think this is a great poem. Some of the word tenses are not traditional, is it supposed to be that way? Either way, it's good :)