You Told the Story well

Detective Write

Her name was Samantha Weathers 

Her best Friends called her Sam for short

Sam made friends easily just with a smile

She could round up friendship

In her old neighborhood

Lots of Guy Friends Lots of Girl friends

Sam was popular around town

She was top of her class

In high school drew a crowd where ever she when

But The things that made her so popular

Could of be dangerous in her life

She couldn't tell a friend from an Enemy 

This fact troubled Sam's Parents

They did worry about  her safety around town

with all the stranger danger out there  today

Parents are the first to notice they are the first

to have a concern about their daughter's where about 

at night Was her good friend going to protect her

The way they should or turn against her

Like they were the creeps of the world today

Sam has a special Guy His name was Terry Gentry

Now Terry was a gentle man

Stood about 6'-0"

Strong well built

Handsome Guy

Sam was lucky to have him for a friend

But Mom and Dad was concerned

Was he really the gentle man

Or Just another creep from the streets

Parents had to find out

they tailed Terry every where he went

Sam's Parents known about this ware about

Terry quickly notice one day

He was being followed

He figured out it must be a P.I.

Checking him out but he had not clue

Just who would put a tail on him

he feels his has done nothing wrong

Nothing to offend an enemy 

He could not figure it was Sam's

Parents who got the whole thing started

He was wondering how he could shake 

their tail.

So Terry started his own investigation

Into the P.I. Capers who were these guys

and just what are they after

Terry Got a team of investigators

To watch his back

and run interference between

Himself and the other P.I.

Terry got a permit to carry a weapon

For his own safety

Has this spy game just gone to far

They stood stop it before some one gets hurt

But the Game continues

With no Referee in the middle of the fight

This could blow up at any minute

Time is getting short

It is like the fuse is lite

and no turning back from here and now

No police could stop this fight

Parents of Sam wanted to protect their 

Daughter at any cost

This could cost them a bundle

Of Pain and money

The wrong guys get in the way

Its going to be a big hurt

For the detective agency

and the P.I. hired to do this work detail

Where will the Chess match end

Looks like stale mate buddy

and that is the end of this tale. 

Reviews

[Jackie]

So a friendly character. Possibly to friendly, parents unsure of the company she is keeping. Could be risky. Could be quite troubling. i do see truth behind this. There are many like this incredibly open to anybody they speak too. Though not very thoughtful of who they are speaking to or could be speaking too. Interesting read smitty. Keep up great work:-)

[Valentine]

Ends if the marry and have kids. Valentine

[wordman]

great tale smitty,but it could be true