Fertility's Fiery Firmament

The scene is looking east from my back yard. Imagine seeing this as you stumble to the kitchen with eyes barely open! It was a dawn like I had never seen before.

 

 

Imagine...Flaming Fluid Fragrance

    Anticipate...Foretasting First-Fruits Fusion

         Experience...Fidelity's Flawless Fandango

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Alliteration- not sure where this belongs.

Reviews

[Rambling Prose]

An amazing write! I'm not familiar with alliteration poetry, but I'm going to investigate now that you've peaked my interest! For me, this spoke of two scenarios:

Flaming Fluid Fragrance: Imagine the fragrance of burning brush wafting through the air (OR) The fragrance of heated passion's bittersweet tanics.

Foretasting First-Fruits Fusion: Anticipate first fruits as the roots below spring forth a promise to multiply upon the earth once again. A fusion of destruction & regeneration (OR) Anticipating first fruits of this fusion of two as they make love for the first time.

Fidelity's Flawless Fandango: Experience this natural phenomenon of purging flames as they faithfully dance across the earth a two step of life & death (a paradox) year-after-year.

I'm probably way out in left field, considering the fact that I have no idea what alliteration poetry is! BUT, this is what my mind's eye saw...

I LOVE it! and I'm going to investigate & have a go at it!

EXCELLENT IMAGERY!

[Adelia Alighieri]

Witty and magnificently crafted. I love the edge of it. Great job!

[Dianne]

This I think is a beautiful summation of your writing style! The flaming imagination, the passionate flavor of your words and the feel of your pen as it dances accross the page. Yah, I like this. You might want to put this in your bio. :-)

[J. James Reider]

it's short... but also very dense... there is alot of content in those three lines that is formed from the very gravity of the words you chose. I don't know, for some reason, now that I read this, I think I want a margarita... lol... great job!

[Melissa]

How uniquely inspiring! Is this a form of poetry or is it just a poem that sprang from creativity? Whatever it's wonderful and I love the way it grabs the reader and gives them an almost double take. Wonderful writing and great imagery with the minds eye!

[Dizzy-Izzy]

Hi Bec, I love that photo. Love the poem too. "Fidelity's Flawless Fandango" what a great line. I'll hang on to it... It helps.

[Legion]

True, lots of alliteration, but what does it mean? Not sure I understand it. Or is it suppose to be?