Indubitably Yours�

 

Indubitably Yours…

 
Whispers into being

a sanctuary

 

Indubitably Yours…

 

Embraces her spirit

to shield

 

Indubitably Yours…

 

Dabs her heart

to serenity

 

Indubitably Mine…

 

His Nest

            His Protection

                                His Wings

 

Reviews

[J. James Reider]

So touching, it fills my heart (:

The lines "His nest, his protection, his wings" really took me by surprise. Such a simile could never be lost on me... Very few poems actually affect me after reading them, this one did... A good thing (:

Indubitably is such a unique word... I never use it... Save for a few instances (; I could read this everyday as if it were an affirmation, something that would help boost me through my day! It is calming and mellow, yet carries such an impact. When I first saw it, I reeled a bit, was completely amazed. Wonderful job (:

[HoorayForUnderdog]

beautiful!

[Constance]

This is a simple, but absolutely lovely piece. What a treasure of beauty this is. The end is perfect, and I love your word choice. Job well done!

[Barbary Chaapel]

Hello,

I very much like this poem that circles life so well with its word pictures.

And thank you for commenting on my work recently.

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I like it. Such simplicity ... such depth.