Understand this; if nothing else.

Understand this; if nothing else.

A Poem by Time.
"

"
Let us get this straight. You hurt me, not the other way around. My heart is a heart, not a chess piece, You can’t move me to and fro as you please. I am me, I’m out there soaring I was always meant to be free. You said that you understood, I now see you never could. You tried, even if you lied, once, twice.. enough. Being hurt, rips you apart, But with my life I may finally be able to start. Live well laugh plenty and love much, Be careful not to fall subject to a womans touch, Cruel uncaring and cold, once you’ve been used you become dried up and old. Onward over the rainbow I do hope you find your gold..

© 2012 Time.


Author's Note

Time.
I'm just looking for ideas on this, I'm not looking for grammar corrections.. at a later date i'll allow them but please just tell me how this flows.. thanks :D

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

214 Views
Added on June 24, 2012
Last Updated on June 24, 2012

Author

Time.
Time.

England, B L A N K :), United Kingdom



About
I love reading, I write Poems whether you think there good or not there from my heart and soul, each have a purpose to me.. I write things down that happen in my life, it may not be that day or the n.. more..

Writing
Poem For E. Poem For E.

A Poem by Time.


Soules Soules

A Poem by Time.