VALID

You've right, you're right
Leave troubles far of thine sight
why to sink?
Just after creating magic in a blink
Don't forget to break the link
Link, with all those trolls, all those
Faceless fellas, called critics

Feel heavenly, live daringly
Stay uninfected, most are
Disease proned!
This is adequacy, just lack of literacy
Will bring bundle of fallacy
Pretend not to be a junkie,
Serve as lavishing monkey
Prudency will fall on carpet
Let your feets tap on it!

It's possible and valid to utter
How Impossible !
You've right, you're right
Can't please every heart,
Can't praise every art!
Just few lines ,
Connecting the dots!

Author's Note

After a long....love you all...! :)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, all the damn critics who tear apart what they couldn't write in a lifetime...that kind of writing that stirs the heart and mind...i heard a quote in a movie once..."many writers know the rules of writing, but they don't know how to write.

i like this piece...
j.

[Sneh]

Considering your insights here... Thanks much Jacob! :)

[Ted Kniffen]

Very good Sneh...live life on your own terms...do not let what others think influence you or your decisions. Feel free to make mistakes and take ownership of your mistakes. Most of all, be an individual not a lemming.

Good job

[Sneh]

Yes Mr Ted, I appreciate your thoughts and kind words....! Thank you! :)

[R.L. Davenport]

That's the key right there. Don't get infected, don't become a zombie. A teetering tot and almost an art itself to remaining balanced and out of hatreds and spites eye. One second we're divine, the next we are in the same cage as animals. Good job.

[Sneh]

So true!
Thank you so much man!! :)