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Let it be O' Sun
By: Adam M. Snow

Over the hills, I wait for thee;
the sunlight beam of dusk.
Yet a silent to provoke me,
yonder with the morning musk.
Yet profound by a morning sound;
the wind-chimed birds.
A beauty to be found,
within nature's words.
With the aura of a newborn day;
an outstretched colors,
painted like the month of May.
I wait for thee O' sun, light my day.
Let flowers blossom, with fragrance great;
with beauty so awe it beknownst my fate.
Well beknownst to me, the soon setting sun-
denoted the beginning of night marks the end of day.
Showering me with beauty outdone,
like the birth of May.
With the grace of God, your beauty dost shine.
A proof of my existence, a fairy tale dream-
to taste life ajar, a nectar of wine
and sample the melody of the sunlight beam.

Reviews

[Jazmen]

Choice idea. What a wonderful thing to go on and on about - organic purity, rejoice to the beautiful Earth, as well as to the simple chirping of birds, and the rebirth in spring and the flourishing under sunlight, yes, I like this poem because it is wise.
This is poetry well done.
And it doesnt bother the reader to endure the mid section, as its rhythm is lost sometimes in your detailing. I think it makes the poem more endearing and authentic in its way and your details are important between the rhythm of "May". I think you know you've made it work just fine.
The last 3 lines make up for any apparent lost rhythm anyway. Good work. I'm always glad to read something so positive.

[Renée]

Beautiful Adam ! Another world another time..it seems...

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[WingsToFly]

Beautiful poem and amazing art.

[kublakhan27]

Pure beauty...I'm not even sure how to elaborate on that sentiment...just a gorgeous piece.

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice. This is poetry strictly defined. Excellent work.

[Levi Levin]

A very elegant piece of writing indeed!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you for your kind review

[Levi Levin]

Thank you my friend:)