Be still Beating Heart

A Poem by Adam M. Snow

Be still my beating heart, your pounding intrudes me. It fills me with pains; I ache with sorrow of thee.

Be still Beating Heart

By: Adam M. Snow

Be still my beating heart,
your pounding intrudes me.
It fills me with pains;
I ache with sorrow of thee.
You tell me to love,
but why do you break thee?
If it's not meant to be, then why?
Why don't you let me see?

© 2013 Adam M. Snow

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Coyote Poetry

The photos do give life and purpose to the poem. Direct and honest words in the poem. I believe in karma. I paid the price for being young and foolish. The questions at the end can be answered in due time. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
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I love your writing style my friend. A short but emotional piece, one which others can easily relate to. Well penned :)

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Beautifully done my friend, enjoyed :) x

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10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review.

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Added on August 16, 2013
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Adam M. Snow

Phoenix , AZ

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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..