Virgin Love

Virgin Love

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
"

My first time loving heart; I knew it from the start; thus be a dream; to let all sparkle and gleam. If only thou knew my love; was truly sent from above;

"
Virgin Love
By: Adam M. Snow

My first time loving heart;
I knew it from the start;
thus be a dream;
to let all sparkle and gleam.
If only thou knew my love;
was truly sent from above;
would I be here right now;
speaking a virgin's love vow?

How great is thy passion?
It pierces thee with fashion;
like a spear called lovers woe;
for I feel it's gentle flow.
Thus be a wish upon a star;
for I know who thou are.
Tis be but a virgin love;
sent from heaven like a dove.

Thus this be a lover's birth;
no money can equal its worth.
Thus it blooms gently like a rose;
and yet preciously it grows.
I have great affection;
for that girl in the moonlight reflection.
I am but a man unspoken;
with love never broken.

© 2010 Adam M. Snow


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

nice write, virgin love, nice poem, great...brilliant write... =D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Innocence...love sure was a lot simpler before all the heartbreak. Sorry don't mean to cheapen your poem. We have all been in that place of virgin love. Nicely written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


It reminds me of the epic love poems of Byron in it's formation. Lovely writing here. I really enjoy your writing style.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Absolutely lovely, kudos!
Great flow and great rhyme; quite heartwarming and expressive. Your choice of words such as thus, thou and tis, gives an almost archaic quality.

Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the title of "virgin' love, especially because of its innocent and purity. This was great!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

692 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on May 23, 2010
Last Updated on May 23, 2010
Tags: virgin, love, romance, passion, heart, heaven, dove, dream, star, wish, snow, lover, family, friends, rose, dark, moon, moonlight, twilight, night, money, broken, birth

Author

Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

Glendale, AZ



About
"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..